My topic is about the effects that the image of people in advertisements influence the growth of eating disorders in the US. So far I've been able to come with a lot of factual information about the eating disorders and using them to show the significance of them. Ive been able to clarify the causes and some effects of eating disorders. I feel as if I am blunt and tell things how they are in my research report so far and I feel like that helps to give a rather serious and address the issue of eating disorders with a real emotion and in a way where I feel as if the reader will be able to understand my topic.
I do feel as if I'm not doing too good with structuring my report I feel like I keep moving certain sentences or even paragraphs from place to place to try to make things flow and it sort of stresses me out. I like what I've mentioned in my report so far but I feel like I could add more facts about ads and if I could get some help with that if anyone has a link that I could look at regarding facts on the effects on people from being shown these ads that make us want to be like other people.
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